Plan to travel if I have 100,000 USD or 10,000 or 1,000

2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kite

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It is always joyful imagination for me that I could enjoy travel. If I have 100,000USD in my pocket, I would have a number of luxurious options to enjoy my trip. Maybe, I would book my air ticket to many countries over the world, not limited to couple of countries. Every day and night, I will stay in decent area during my stay in tourist sites, enjoying delicious foods. I would consider buying many goods including souvenir, but I will never manage to spend the whole money given to me. In case of 10,000 USD, it is proper amount of money for me to enjoy travelling around EU countries with my family members. When it comes to 1,000USD, maybe I couldn't plan to travel oversea because it would be little bit tough budget to go far distance by air.

강사 첨삭

Hi Wan! I think I agree with you. If I have a hundred thousand dollars I think I will try to live in a castle when I travel. ^_^  But anyway thank you for answering the question!


It is always joyful imagination for me that I could enjoy travel.

>> It is always a joyful thing for me to imagine that I can truly enjoy traveling.

If I have 100,000USD in my pocket, I would have a number of luxurious options to enjoy my trip. Maybe, I would book my air ticket to many countries over the world, not limited to couple of countries.

>> If I have 100,000 USD in my pocket, I would have a number of luxurious options to enjoy my trip. Maybe, I would book tickets to different countries over the world.

Every day and night, I will stay in decent area during my stay in tourist sites, enjoying delicious foods.

>>Everyday and every night, I will stay in a decent place during my stay and also to enjoy delicious variety of food.

I would consider buying many goods including souvenir, but I will never manage to spend the whole money given to me.

>>CORRECT

In case of 10,000 USD, it is proper amount of money for me to enjoy travelling around EU countries with my family members.

 >>In case of the 10,000 USD, this is the proper amount of money for me to enjoy traveling around Europe with my family.

When it comes to 1,000USD, maybe I couldn\'t plan to travel oversea because it would be little bit tough budget to go far distance by air.

>>When it comes to 1,000 USD, maybe I couldn\'t plan to travel overseas because this budget it not enough to go to farther places.

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