Plan to travel if I have 100,000 USD or 10,000 or 1,000
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Hi Wan! I think I agree with you. If I have a hundred thousand dollars I think I will try to live in a castle when I travel. ^_^ But anyway thank you for answering the question!
It is always joyful imagination for me that I could enjoy travel.
>> It is always a joyful thing for me to imagine that I can truly enjoy traveling.
If I have 100,000USD in my pocket, I would have a number of luxurious options to enjoy my trip. Maybe, I would book my air ticket to many countries over the world, not limited to couple of countries.
>> If I have 100,000 USD in my pocket, I would have a number of luxurious options to enjoy my trip. Maybe, I would book tickets to different countries over the world.
Every day and night, I will stay in decent area during my stay in tourist sites, enjoying delicious foods.
>>Everyday and every night, I will stay in a decent place during my stay and also to enjoy delicious variety of food.
I would consider buying many goods including souvenir, but I will never manage to spend the whole money given to me.
>>CORRECT
In case of 10,000 USD, it is proper amount of money for me to enjoy travelling around EU countries with my family members.
>>In case of the 10,000 USD, this is the proper amount of money for me to enjoy traveling around Europe with my family.
When it comes to 1,000USD, maybe I couldn\'t plan to travel oversea because it would be little bit tough budget to go far distance by air.
>>When it comes to 1,000 USD, maybe I couldn\'t plan to travel overseas because this budget it not enough to go to farther places.
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