planning a trip.

2010-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I have two friends, actually they are older than me. We had a trip before and we had a [이름]derful time without any expectation. So when we got together last monday we planned a trip. But one of them who was called 'The boy who cried wolf' worried me. Do you know the boy who is a liar? Because in former days, he borke up our planned trip which was asked by himself. I teased him whenever he suggest something,"The boy who cried wolf" By the way, He suggested a trip once again. I don't know we can go on a trip. Even if he will disappoint me but I cannot but trust him. Because I really want a trip. Please keep your fingers crossed for me. I wish evrything will go into orbit.

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Hi J!!! Sure, I뭠l cross my fingers for you. For my friends, if we plan a trip it usually doesn뭪 push through. Unplanned trips are the ones that happe most of the time. I don뭪 know why. Like last time, we planned for an out of town trip and then suddenly 1 day before the trip my friends started to back out due to emergency reasons. Isn뭪 that funny? Well I hope you뭠l have this one. Take care!! Lei JI have two friends, actually they are older than me.>>correctWe had a trip before and we had a [이름]derful time without any expectation.>>correctSo when we got together last monday we planned to have another trip.>>correctBut one of them who was called 'The boy who cried wolf' worried me.>>correctDo you know the story of the boy who is a liar?>>correctBecause in former days, he broke up our planned trip which was asked by himself.>>Because before, he used to break the planned trip which was planned by him.I teased him whenever he suggests something,"The boy who cried wolf">>correctBy the way, He suggested to have a trip once again.>>correctI don't know if we can go on a trip. >>correctEven if he will disappoint me but I cannot but trust him.>>Even if I have a feeling that he will again disappoint me, I cannot help but trust him.Because I really want to have a trip.>>correctPlease keep your fingers crossed for me.>>correctI wish evrything will go into the orbit. >>correct

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