planning or not planning for your leisure time?

2013-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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I tend to not specifically make a plan for my free time except some special occasions like summer or winter vacation.I play tennis whenever I have free time like on holidays, so I do not need to plan for my leisure time unless there are special things to do. Actually it is a key reason for my wife and daughter to complaint about me or sometimes even to cause a family quarrel because I always put priority on playing tennis other than anything else when we make a plan for our leave.My wife and daughter like traveling, staying a night outside, and going to famous restaurants whenever time is allowed probably because she is sick and tired of staying all day at home and doing all the house works such as cooking, doing dishes, and cleaning the house.I can understand how stressful it is for her to do all the same jobs every day, but I also need a time to relax and relive my stress.She says that it’s okay for me to play tennis, but I should balance it. As a compromise, I'll put aside time for

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  I tend to not specifically make a plan for my free time except some special occasions like summer or winter vacation.

>> I tend to not specifically make a plan for my free time except for some special occasions like summer or winter vacation.

 I play tennis whenever I have free time like on holidays, so I do not need to plan for my leisure time unless there are special things to do.

>>Correct

  Actually it is a key reason for my wife and daughter to complaint about me or sometimes even to cause a family quarrel because I always put priority on playing tennis other than anything else when we make a plan for our leave.

>>Actually, it is the key reason for my wife and daughter to complain about me or sometimes even to cause a family quarrel because I always put priority on playing tennis than on anything else when we make a plan for vacation.

 My wife and daughter like traveling, staying a night outside, and going to famous restaurants whenever time is allowed probably because she is sick and tired of staying all day at home and doing all the house works such as cooking, doing dishes, and cleaning the house.

>>My wife and my daughter like traveling, spending their nights outside, and going to famous restaurants whenever we can probably because my wife is sick and tired of staying all day at home and doing all the house chores such as cooking, doing the dishes, and cleaning the house.

 I can understand how stressful it is for her to do all the same jobs every day, but I also need a time to relax and relive my stress.

>>Correct (check your spelling, though: relieve)

 She says that it’s okay for me to play tennis, but I should balance it. 

>>Correct

 As a compromise, I\'ll put aside time for

>>To compromise with this one, I\'ll put aside _.

[I\'ll wait for the continuation of your composition.^^]

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