Plans
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Do you have your plans? I have plans for me. First, I want to work in computer graphics company to gain experience. And someday, I want to live and work in Canada. These plans are not sure.
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Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I have plans for me.
>> I have plans for myself.
First, I want to work in computer graphics company to gain experience.
>> First, I want to work in a computer graphics company to gain experience.
And someday, I want to live and work in Canada.
>> Correct
OR >> And someday, I hope to live and work in Canada.
These plans are not sure.
>> These plans are uncertain.
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