Plans for my vacation.

2010-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

Wow, winter vacation is so close!! I have only 4 days ( including today ) until winter vacation. My winter vacation is on Christmas eve. So, my Mom told me to invite my friends to Mc.Donalds and then, I can play soccer with my friends!! Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to ski resort andride skies and boards every week!! This time, I gonna learn boarding!! I am going to go there Saturday night and come at dawn of Sunday. We will ride a night ski. In addition, I'm going to go to Lottle World every week. This time vacation will be so exciting!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey,  Hey, that sounds great. I bet you can do all sorts of for your winter vacation. Let's talk more about it later. -RJ-  Wow, winter vacation is so close!! >>correctI have only 4 days ( including today ) until winter vacation. >>correctMy winter vacation is on Christmas eve. >>correctSo, my Mom told me to invite my friends to Mc.Donalds and then, I can play soccer with my friends!!>>So, my Mom told me to invite my friends to McDonald's and then I can play soccer with my them! Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to ski resort andride skies and boards every week!!  >>Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to the ski resort and ride skies and boards every week!!This time, I gonna learn boarding!! >>This time, I'm gonna learn boarding!!I am going to go there Saturday night and come at dawn of Sunday. >>I am going to go there Saturday night and come back at the dawn of Sunday.We will ride a night ski.  >>We will go skiing at night.In addition, I'm going to go to Lottle World every week.  >>In addition, I'm going to go to Lotte World every week. This time vacation will be so exciting!! >>correct

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