Plans for my vacation.
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow, winter vacation is so close!!
I have only 4 days ( including today ) until winter vacation.
My winter vacation is on Christmas eve.
So, my Mom told me to invite my friends to Mc.Donalds and then, I
can play soccer with my friends!!
Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to ski resort andride skies and boards every week!!
This time, I gonna learn boarding!!
I am going to go there Saturday night and come at dawn of Sunday.
We will ride a night ski.
In addition, I'm going to go to Lottle World every week.
This time vacation will be so exciting!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Joey,
Hey, that sounds great. I bet you can do all sorts of for your winter vacation. Let's talk more about it later.
-RJ-
Wow, winter vacation is so close!!
>>correctI have only 4 days ( including today ) until winter vacation.
>>correctMy winter vacation is on Christmas eve.
>>correctSo, my Mom told me to invite my friends to Mc.Donalds and then, I can play soccer with my friends!!>>So, my Mom told me to invite my friends to McDonald's and then I can play soccer with my them!
Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to ski resort andride skies and boards every week!!
>>Also, My Mom and Dad promised me that we will go to the ski resort and ride skies and boards every week!!This time, I gonna learn boarding!!
>>This time, I'm gonna learn boarding!!I am going to go there Saturday night and come at dawn of Sunday.
>>I am going to go there Saturday night and come back at the dawn of Sunday.We will ride a night ski.
>>We will go skiing at night.In addition, I'm going to go to Lottle World every week.
>>In addition, I'm going to go to Lotte World every week. This time vacation will be so exciting!!
>>correct
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