Plans for the weekend, Historical place
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Plans for the weekend
- I heard that the weather would be not good because of rain. If weather is great, I will plan to hang out with friends. So since I have a exam, I plan to go study room.
4. Today’s buildings attract our sights and look like gorgeous. So it would be able to the historic places in the future. However, I believe that our old traditional cultures would be still historic places in the future because we can’t make again.
5. Of course. Historical places show people one country’s living things. If these things look like modern styles, people won’t come our country. So people wonder what atmosphere or style in one’s country.
6. Yes. There is a person who will ruin our historic places. I don’t know why they do, few years ago there was a person who did that in my country. To restore this place, the nation went through really hard time.
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Have a blast this weekend. ^_^
- I heard that the weather would be not good because of rain.
>> I heard that the weather would not be good because of the rain.
If weather is great, I will plan to hang out with friends.
>> If the weather is great, I will hang out with friends.
So since I have a exam, I plan to go study room.
4. Today’s buildings attract our sights and look like gorgeous.
>> So since I have an exam, I plan to go to the study room.
>> 4. Today’s tall buildings attracts people.
So it would be able to the historic places in the future.
>> So it could be a historic place in the future.
However, I believe that our old traditional cultures would be still historic places in the future because we can’t make again.
5. Of course.
>> However, I believe that our old traditional cultures would still be included as historical places in the future because we can’t replace them.
>> Correct.
Historical places show people one country’s living things.
>> Historical places show peoples culture.
If these things look like modern styles, people won’t come our country.
>> If these look like modern, people won’t come to our country.
So people wonder what atmosphere or style in one’s country.
6. Yes. There is a person who will ruin our historic places.
>> So people wonder about what cultures and heritages are in ones country.
>> Yes. There are people who ruins historical places.
I don’t know why they do, few years ago there was a person who did that in my country.
>> I don’t know why they do this, few years ago there was a person who did that in my country.
To restore this place, the nation went through really hard time.
>> To restore this place, the nation went through a really hard time.
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