plans to do on weekend

2010-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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yesterday, i went to the beach with my family. it was ranny in the morning, but it started to stop rainning fom afternoon. i don't like people crowded and sticky day. so it was good wether for me. the sea water is very cool to swim and play with tube. the wave is low. i didn't see any women wearing bikini. but there are women in bikini in Bu-san city. a shark came out in East-sea according to the news. what a surprise. anyway, i prefer to the indoor swimming pool.

강사 첨삭

HelloTracy, I'm happy to receive your composition about your weekend acitivities. I envy you because you were able to go swimming. I really love swimming! Take care. See you in the class tomorrow! Love, Verna yesterday, i went to the beach with my family. >> Correctit was ranny in the morning, but it started to stop rainning fom afternoon. >>it was raining in the morning, but it started to stop raining in the afternoon.i don't like people crowded and sticky day. >> I don't like it when people are crowded because it makes me the day sticky.so it was good wether for me. >> So it was a good weather for me.the sea water is very cool to swim and play with tube. >> Correctthe wave is low. >> Correcti didn't see any women wearing bikini. >> Correctbut there are women in bikini in Bu-san city. >> Correcta shark came out in East-sea according to the news. >> Correctwhat a surprise! Correct anyway, i prefer to the indoor swimming pool. Anyway, I still prefer indoor swimming pool.

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