Plastic bags take up less space in a landfill than paper bags?

2022-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I do not exactly know how plastic and paper bags are taken up space in a landfill. Given my consumption pattern, I expect that plastic bags are taken up more space in a landfill than paper bags. I visit convenience stores a lot. Whenever I go to the convenience store, employees provide plastic bags to pack stuff that I want to buy. Because of cool beverages and refrigerated foods, they give plastic bags rather than weak paper bags. According to BBC news, paper bags are greener and more eco-friendly than plastic bags. I want to say to customers that totally not using planting bags is impossible, however, we should try to reduce the amount of consumption of plastic bags.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Helena!
I agree that we cannot completely ban the use of plastic bags because of certain instances. However, people are still encouraged to lessen their use or if not, try recycling plastics.
-T. Caitlyn
I do not exactly know how plastic and paper bags are taken up space in a landfill. 
>> I do not exactly know how plastic and paper bags are taking up space in a landfill. 
Given my consumption pattern, I expect that plastic bags are taken up more space in a landfill than paper bags. 
>> Given my consumption pattern, I expect that plastic bags take up more space in a landfill than paper bags. 
I visit convenience stores a lot. 
>> CORRECT
Whenever I go to the convenience store, employees provide plastic bags to pack stuff that I want to buy. 
>> CORRECT
Because of cool beverages and refrigerated foods, they give plastic bags rather than weak paper bags.
>> When buying cold beverages and refrigerated foods, they always use plastic bags rather than weak paper bags.
According to BBC news, paper bags are greener and more eco-friendly than plastic bags. 
>> CORRECT
I want to say to customers that totally not using planting bags is impossible, however, we should try to reduce the amount of consumption of plastic bags.
>> I want to say to customers that totally not using plastic bags is impossible, however, we should try to reduce the amount of consumption of plastic bags.

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