Plastic surgery
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Almost 7 years ago, I met by surprise on the street my middle school classemate. She was one of my best friend at that time. I reconised her quickly and she does alos. We exchanged our phone number and met up regulary since that time. She is naturally pretty woman and she has almost the same face than her teenage year. In Korea, doing plastic surgery is quite commun and she and I we did not do any plastic surgery. It helps us to reconise each other easily even if we did not meet up for almost 15 years. She is now married and has two boys. Time flies. It is touching to see her as mom. I feel nostalgic about my middle school year when I meet her.
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Good evening Ms. [이름]!
I bet you did talk a lot when you met her.
It\'s good to remember the old days :)
Thank you!
Almost 7 years ago, I met by surprise on the street my middle school classemate.
>>It was almost seven years when we last saw each other and I ran into an old friend from middle school.
She was one of my best friend at that time.
>>She was one of my best friends at the time.
I reconised her quickly and she does alos.
>>I recognized her quickly and so did she.
We exchanged our phone number and met up regulary since that time.
>>We\'ve exchanged phone numbers and meet regularly since then.
She is naturally pretty woman and she has almost the same face than her teenage year.
>>She is a naturally pretty woman and has the same face as when she was a teenager.
In Korea, doing plastic surgery is quite commun and she and I we did not do any plastic surgery.
>>Plastic surgery is common in Korea, and she and I didn\'t have plastic surgery.
It helps us to reconise each other easily even if we did not meet up for almost 15 years.
>>It helps us to recognize each other easily even if we don\'t meet for nearly 15 years.
She is now married and has two boys.
>>CORRECT!
OR: She is married now and has two sons.
Time flies.
>>CORRECT!
It is touching to see her as mom.
>>CORRECT!
OR: It\'s touching to see her as a mother.
I feel nostalgic about my middle school year when I meet her.
>>I miss my middle school days when I meet her.
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