plastic surgery
학생이 쓴 원문
Everyone wants to be pretty and beautiful.
That\'s true of all men, women, old people and young people.
So I think cosmetic surgery has no age limit.
However, I know that our natural appearance is very beautiful.
Therefore, we can all have plastic surgery.
But as we get older, we have to restrain ourselves about it.
강사 첨삭
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Everyone wants to be pretty and beautiful.
>> Correct
That\'s true of all men, women, old people and young people.
That\'s true of all men, women, old people and young people.
>> Correct
So I think cosmetic surgery has no age limit.
So I think cosmetic surgery has no age limit.
>> Correct
However, I know that our natural appearance is very beautiful.
However, I know that our natural appearance is very beautiful.
>> Correct
Therefore, we can all have plastic surgery.
Therefore, we can all have plastic surgery.
>> Correct
But as we get older, we have to restrain ourselves about it.
But as we get older, we have to restrain ourselves about it.
>> However, as we get older, we have to restrain ourselves from going through it.
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