Plastic surgery

2011-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Can you count how many people around you have had cosmetic surgery done? Um. Nowadays cosmetic sugery is booming in Korea. So most of women around me have had it. My mother and my sister also had it. My sister had a plastic surgery on her eyes and nose. My mom also had it on her nose. Since most of korean women had plastic surgery, I can't even count. 2. What do you think about president No's new look? Former president No had plastic surgery on his eyes. I thought it was really funny. But I saw the news that he had it because of the pain on his eyes. In conclusion, he didn't do it for the beauty. So I am with him After surgery , he became more cute.

강사 첨삭

[이름] my dear,
Thats a job well done..:)
keep up the good work..
T.Camille 
Can you count how many people around you have had cosmetic surgery done?
Um. Nowadays cosmetic sugery is booming in Korea.
>>correct!
So most of women around me have had it.
>>correct!
My mother and my sister also had it.
>>correct!
My sister had a plastic surgery on her eyes and nose.
>>correct!
My mom also had it on her nose.
>>correct!
Since most of korean women had plastic surgery, I can't even count.
>>correct!
2. What do you think about president No's new look?
Former president No had plastic surgery on his eyes.
>>correct!
I thought it was really funny.
>>correct!
But I saw the news that he had it because of the pain on his eyes.
>>correct!
In conclusion, he didn't do it for the beauty.
>>correct!
So I am with him
>.correct!
After surgery , he became more cute.
>>After the surgery he became cuter than ever.

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