Plastic surgery
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Today, I would like to about very common topic that Is the plastic surgery is good or bad.
>> Today, I would like to about a very common topic and that is whether plastic surgery is good or bad.
It is a very common and old topic and I remember that I talked about it several times.
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It sounds like easy topic to debate.
>> It sounds like an easy topic for a debate.
And I am also be used to talk about it.
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But Shooters who are panels in my favorite program were totally different.
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They were divided into two in the program as well.
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But their opinion was based on very concreted knowledge and they showed their opinions logically.
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The panels who think that plastic surgery is not good said that human has a natural beauty inside.
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Because of lookism people are force to be pushed to having plastic surgery.
>> Because of lookism people are forced/ pushed to have plastic surgery.
And mess media in Korea has been also boosting go under the knife.
>> And the mass media in Korea has also been boosting to go under the knife.
Indeed, Is it right phenomenon?
>> Indeed, Is it a right phenomenon?
The other panels opposed their opinion.
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Having plastic surgery is a personal choice.
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We don’t have the right to judge them.
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