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2012-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I played the piano, when I was 10 years old. I attended the competition and I recieved the bronz medal. After a few years, my mother sold piano. Because I occasionally played the piano, and my house moved more little house. Now I'm a poor hand about piano. I regret that I hasn't played the piano but instead I has interested art and now I'm art directer. Thank you Ma'am.

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Hello Susan, You're welcome! ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up! T.Faye Here are your corrections: I played the piano, when I was 10 years old. >>Correct!I attended the competition and I recieved the bronz medal. >>I participated in a competition and I received a bronze medal.After a few years, my mother sold piano. >>A few years later, my mother sold the piano.Because I occasionally played the piano, and my house moved more little house. >>Because I occassionally played the piano and we moved to a smaller house.Now I\'m a poor hand about piano. >>Now, I am not that good at playing the piano.I regret that I hasn\'t played the piano but instead I has interested art and now I\'m art directer. >>I regret that I haven't played the piano and now I interest myself with art that is why I am an art director.Thank you Ma\'am. >>Correct!

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