Play computergame LOL

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework at your own time. ^^

It seems like you get excited talking about this computer game.

It is also popular in my country especially for teenage boys and some adults.

I wonder what makes it so interesting.

I think you have a wonderful hobby. Just keep in mind that you have to balance it with your studies.

You did a good job with your sentences. Just be very careful with your pronouns.

Use them properly and use the proper verb for it. I hope you\'d make longer sentences next

time. Take care^^

t. Chloe^^

Here are some of my corrections for you:

I\'m played the computergame.

>> I played the/a computer game.
The game name is LOL.

>> The game\'s name is LOL.
It is very famous game.

>> It is a very famous game.

OR> It\'s a very popular game.
It is very interesting.

>> CORRECT

OR> It caught my interest.
My feel is very good today.

>> I feel good today.
I played with my friend.

>> CORRECT

OR> My friend and I played together.