Play with friend

2016-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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Last weekend, I met my friends who graduated high school at the same time for a long time. we're the best friends each other, whenever every 3 month, we used to go pension to hang out together. but after I got married, we've not met often than before. Last saturday, my wife had an appointment first, so I decided to meet friends. They're not talker or funny guy, and very ordinary person, but makes me comfortable. whenever they meet, I feel like I came to childhood. we so saved our pension fee that had arranged pension at surburb by using Air BnB application. at 3pm, we went playing bowling first. I'm not good at playing, my average score would be 100 around. so I lost a game. Next schedule was playing video game. we like playing very much. when we're 20, we started playing, and we still play video game some time. whenever play video game, I feels like the time go very faster. The dinner was steamed clam, stew of clam is very delicious. it is well-suite with Soju.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!


Thanks for sharing your experience!!Its great to hear that you are able to meet your friends!! As you know friendship is the most wonderful relationship that anyone can have. Ideally a friend is a person who offers love and respect and will never leave or betray us. Friends can tell harsh truths when they must be told. There are four different types of friends: True friends, Convenient friends, Special interest friends, and historical friends. To have friendship is to have comfort. In times of crisis and depression, a friend is there to calm us and to help lift up our spirits.











~Teacher Megan~




Last weekend, I met my friends who graduated high school at the same time for a long time.

>> Last weekend, I met my high school friends, I haven\'t seen them for a long time.


we\'re the best friends each other, whenever every 3 month, we used to go pension to hang out together.

>> We are best friends and we usually meet every 3 months. We usually go to the Pension to hang out together.


 but after I got married, we\'ve not met often than before.

>>  but after I got married, we don\'t hang out often than before.


Last saturday, my wife had an appointment first, so I decided to meet friends.

>> Last saturday, my wife had an appointment , so I decided to meet my friends. 


 They\'re not talker or funny guy, and very ordinary person, but makes me comfortable.

>> They are not talkative or funny , they are just ordinary but they make me comfortable.


whenever they meet, I feel like I came to childhood.

>> whenever we hang out, I feel young and lively.


we so saved our pension fee that had arranged pension at surburb by using Air BnB application.

>>So we saved our pension fee and arranged a pension at  the surburb by using Air BnB application.


 at 3pm, we went playing bowling first.

>> Firstly, we played bowling. at 3 pm


I\'m not good at playing, my average score would be 100 around.

>>  I\'m not good at playing, my average score would be around 100.


 so I lost a game. Next schedule was playing video game.

>>  so I lost the game. The next activity on the schedule is playing video game.


we like playing very much. when we\'re 20, we started playing, and we still play video game some time.

>> we like playing video games very much. when we\'re 20, we started playing, and until now we still play it.


whenever play video game, I feels like the time go very faster.

>> whenever we play video games, I feel like the time runs really fast.


 The dinner was steamed clam, stew of clam is very delicious. it is well-suite with Soju.

>> Then lastly, we had a  delicious steamed clam, stew clam for dinner. We suited it with Soju.


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