Playing Baseball 1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I bet you had a great time playing with your friend.
I guess you have mastered baseball already because you have
been practicing baseball ever since. :)
I will see you in our next class.
Have a great time. :)
Take care. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today I played baseball with my friends in the Baekje tomb.
>> Correct
Today,we had a short class because these days teacher usually counsult with parents.
>> Today, we had a short class because these days, teachers consult with our parents.
So,I have some time to play with my friend.
>> So, I have some time to play with my friend.
And we played baseball in the Baekje tomb.
>> Correct
It was exciting and today was warm.
>> Correct
My friend do the baseball well.
>> My friend does the baseball well.
I throw the baseball many times.
>> I threw the baseball many times.
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