Playing Baseball 1

2016-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Today I played baseball with my friends in the Baekje tomb.Today,we had a short class because these days teacher usually counsult with parents.So,I have some time to play with my friend.And we played baseball in the Baekje tomb.It was exciting and today was warm.My friend do the baseball well.I throw the baseball many times.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

I bet you had a great time playing with your friend.

I guess you have mastered baseball already because you have

been practicing baseball ever since. :)


I will see you in our next class.

Have a great time. :)

Take care. :)


~~ Teacher Kris



Today I played baseball with my friends in the Baekje tomb.

>> Correct

Today,we had a short class because these days teacher usually counsult with parents.

>> Today, we had a short class because these days, teachers consult with our parents.

So,I have some time to play with my friend.

>>  So, I have some time to play with my friend.

And we played baseball in the Baekje tomb.

>> Correct

It was exciting and today was warm.

>> Correct

My friend do the baseball well.

>> My friend does the baseball well.

I throw the baseball many times.

>> I threw the baseball many times. 

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