Playing baseball using badminton racket and ball

Today, I played baseball using badminton racket and a shuttlecock. A pitcher throws a shuttlecock and the hitter needs to hit that shuttlecock. It looks like it will be easy to hit the shuttlecock however, it is really hard to hit the shuttlecock because it gets looks of affect of the wind and the shuttlecocks moves like "change up" so it's really hard to throw. Also, it is hard to throw because we need great accuracy of going in strikezone. But, it affects by the wind so it is hard to throw too. Today, in 3 times of hitting, i hit 2 times. It's really fun

Hello Kevin^^ Hey there sporty! Good job for writing this in a letter today. You really know the mechanics of the game, huh? Oh, well twice hitting is not that bad! You can do better though. For your composition, I hope that you would avoid making long sentences for you not to confuse your reader. You used appropriate vocabulary words and that I commend and applaud, it was awesome! Just be careful on your grammar, punctuation and capitalization, okay? Check this out. T'Joan   Today, I played baseball using badminton racket and a shuttlecock. >>Today, I played baseball using badminton racket and shuttlecock.A pitcher throws a shuttlecock and the hitter needs to hit that shuttlecock. >> CORRECT! It looks like it will be easy to hit the shuttlecock however, it is really hard to hit the shuttlecock because it gets looks of affect of the wind and the shuttlecocks moves like "change up" so it's really hard to throw. >> It looks like it will be easy to hit the shuttlecock. However, it is really hard to hit the shuttlecock because it is affected by the wind and the shuttlecock's move changes so it's really hard to throw it. Also, it is hard to throw because we need great accuracy of going in strikezone. >>It is also hard to throw because we need great accuracy in going to the strikezone. But, it affects by the wind so it is hard to throw too. >>But, it is affected by the wind so it is hard to throw too. Today, in 3 times of hitting, i hit 2 times. >>Today, within 3 times of hitting, I hit 2 times. It's really fun >>It's really fun.