playing week
학생이 쓴 원문
I played very much last week.On Christmas Eve day I went to the church.In Chirstmas Day I went to the church and get a present and went to the market.On Tuesday I went to the housewarming and played a game.Next day,I went to the cermony for ancestor and saw a baseball game.On Thursday,I went to the clinc and saw a MonsterHotel.Next day I went to the buff and ate a lot of things.On Friday I went to the Cgy and saw a Star Wars.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Wow! You were busy during Christmas.
I believe you enjoyed your time and I am happy that you did.
Thank you for sharing about your wonderful moments.
I will see you then in our class.
See you! ^^
~~ Teacher Kris
I played very much last week.
>> Correct
On Christmas Eve day I went to the church.
>> On Christmas Eve, I went to the church.
In Chirstmas Day I went to the church and get a present and went to the market.
>> In Christmas Day, I went to the church where I got my present. After that, I went to the market.
On Tuesday I went to the housewarming and played a game.
>> On Tuesday, I went to a housewarming party where I played a game.
Next day,I went to the cermony for ancestor and saw a baseball game.
>> The next day, I attended a ceremony for our ancestors. And after that, I watched a baseball game.
On Thursday,I went to the clinc and saw a MonsterHotel.
>> On thursday, I went to the clinic and I watched the movie, Monster Hotel.
Next day I went to the buff and ate a lot of things.
>> The next day, I went to a buffet and I ate a lot of food.
On Friday I went to the Cgy and saw a Star Wars.
>> On Friday, I went to the Cgy where I saw the movie, Star Wars.
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