Please!

2014-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I had my hair cut a little at beauty shop where located around my place. because I've felt inconvinence in my long and mass hair. but I don't feel satisfaction with my hair style now. (I'm not satisfied with my hair style now.) After cutting my hair, I had my friend Jung over to my home. He has treated me many meals so in order to respond to the hospitality, I made lunch "Spagetti" for him. After having lunch together at my place. Actually, He makes much money ^^;..I deserve serving these helps because I don't have a job yet :-( and as soon as he got back to his place, I took a nap for two hours.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Conner!

Well, I hope I can see your hair cut so that I can make a critique if it looks good on you or not. hahaha.

You can have another haircut if you want. ^^

And do not let your hair grow longer because I am pretty sure that it will not look good on you.

Anyway, thanks for today!!

May you enjoy this coming weekend!

See you again next week.


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Today, I had my hair cut a little at beauty shop where located around my place.

>> I had a hair cut today at a small hair shop which is located around my place.
 because I\'ve felt inconvinence in my long and mass hair.

>> Because I have felt the inconvenience of having a long and massive hair.
 but I don\'t feel satisfaction with my hair style now.

>> But I do not feel the satisfaction with my hair style now.
 (I\'m not satisfied with my hair style now.)

>> correct!
 After cutting my hair, I had my friend Jung over to my home.

>> After having my hair cut, I had my friend Jung come over to my house.
 He has treated me many meals so in order to respond to the hospitality,

>> He treated me with so many meals in order to
 I made lunch \"Spagetti\" for him. 

>> I made a spaghetti for him.

 After having lunch together at my place.

>> We had lunch together at my place.
 Actually, He makes much money ^^;..

>> correct!

I deserve serving these helps  because I don\'t have a job yet :-(

>> I deserve serving him because I do not have a job yet.
 and as soon as he got back to his place, I took a nap for two hours.

>> As soon as he went home, I took a nap for 2 hours.

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