Please!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Conner!
Well, I hope I can see your hair cut so that I can make a critique if it looks good on you or not. hahaha.
You can have another haircut if you want. ^^
And do not let your hair grow longer because I am pretty sure that it will not look good on you.
Anyway, thanks for today!!
May you enjoy this coming weekend!
See you again next week.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today, I had my hair cut a little at beauty shop where located around my place.
>> I had a hair cut today at a small hair shop which is located around my place.
because I\'ve felt inconvinence in my long and mass hair.
>> Because I have felt the inconvenience of having a long and massive hair.
but I don\'t feel satisfaction with my hair style now.
>> But I do not feel the satisfaction with my hair style now.
(I\'m not satisfied with my hair style now.)
>> correct!
After cutting my hair, I had my friend Jung over to my home.
>> After having my hair cut, I had my friend Jung come over to my house.
He has treated me many meals so in order to respond to the hospitality,
>> He treated me with so many meals in order to
I made lunch \"Spagetti\" for him.
>> I made a spaghetti for him.
After having lunch together at my place.
>> We had lunch together at my place.
Actually, He makes much money ^^;..
>> correct!
I deserve serving these helps because I don\'t have a job yet :-(
>> I deserve serving him because I do not have a job yet.
and as soon as he got back to his place, I took a nap for two hours.
>> As soon as he went home, I took a nap for 2 hours.
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