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2015-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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The sentences below "Relative pronouns what" using sentences that want to change. please I'd like to change the sentence for using and the "Relative pronouns what" below. please ==> Second, wearing different clothes every day increases the gap between the rich and poor. OR>> The other reason is that wearing clothes every day widens the the gap between the rich and poor.

강사 첨삭

Good morning! I  used \"what\" in the sentences but then, what I wrote in the previous composition is the best way to say it. Anyway, I hope I was able to help you. ~T. Jessie~ The sentences below \"Relative pronouns what\" using sentences that want to change. >> We want to change the sentences using the relative adjective \"what.\"please>> Please. I\'d like to change the sentence for using and the \"Relative pronouns what\" below.>> I\'d like the sentences below to be changed. Please make use of the relative adjective \"what.\"  please >> Please.==>Second, wearing different clothes every day increases the gap between the rich and poor. >> Correct!>> Second, what children wear in the school increases the the gap between the rich and poor. OR>> Second, the different clothes that  children wear in the school increases the the gap between the rich and poor. OR>> The other reason is that wearing clothes every day widens the the gap between the rich and poor. >> The other reason is that wearing clothes every day widens the gap between the rich and poor. OR>> The other reason is, what children wear widens the gap between the rich and poor.

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