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2015-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Please check over A part! -------------------------- Q: What do you hope to explore, achieve, or gain from being part of the FIGT conference and community? A:In Korea, there aren't many scholars who are interested in and study CCKs. Though research about TCKs, CCKs are growing, various studies are few. It needs to more many diverse researches, books, interest for CCKs in Korea. So, I want to know other many researches, books, scholars in FIGT conference. Q:How did you hear about FIGT and the Pollock Scholarship? A:I've heard FIGT through Kyoungmi Choi professor who studies TCKs. A: I like to travel abroad, meet foreigners. I was a Korean teaching assistant for Japanese students during my graduate school.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!

Happy Monday!

Thanks for sending this in. ^^

Please go over the corrections below.

Have a good day.

Teacher Nina

>> correct

Though research about TCKs, CCKs are growing, various studies are few.

>> correct

It needs to more many diverse researches, books, interest for CCKs in Korea.

>> It needs many diverse researches, books, interests for CCKs in Korea.

So, I want to know other many researches, books, scholars in FIGT conference.

>> correct
Q:How did you hear about FIGT and the Pollock Scholarship?
A:I\'ve heard FIGT through Kyoungmi Choi professor who studies TCKs.

>> I\'ve heard FIGT through Professor Kyoungmi Choi who studies TCKs.

A: I like to travel abroad, meet foreigners.

>> correct

>> OR: I like to travel abroad to meet foreigners.

I was a Korean teaching assistant for Japanese students during my graduate school.

>> I worked as a Korean teacher assistant for Japanese students when I was in graduate school.

>> OR: I was a Korean teacher assistant for Japanese students when I was in graduate school.

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