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1. please recorrect the some vocabulary. document of tip on how I can make a good self-moving article writted that using no repeat vocabaruy much better good >>I have a lot of experience in activities in and out of my University. I have knowledge in using the computer and programs in the computer such as Microsoft excel, word, power point and others. -> computer >>I also have experience in relation to accounting and using the programs in accounting. ->accounting >>I am continuously improving my skills and knowledge and I always keep a smile on my face to help me have a good day at work and to help me connect with my workmates. -> to help me

Hello [이름] [이름]!

Thank you so much for sending me your composition.You actually did well on you composition.On the other hand.It will help you a lot if you check the thesaurus for the synonym of a certain word not to repeat it in a sentence.Hope it will help.Have a good day!

-T.Faye-

 

1. please recorrect the some vocabulary.

 document of tip on how I can make a good self-moving article

 writted that using no repeat vocabaruy much better good

>>Please correct some vocabulary words that are used.Give a  tip on how to make a good article that does not repeat a word to make it better.

 >>I have a lot of experience in activities in and out of my University.

>>I have a lot of experience of activities in and out of my University.

 I have knowledge in using the computer and programs in the computer such as Microsoft excel, word, power point and others.

>>Correct

 -> computer

>>Correct

 >>I also have experience in relation to accounting and using the programs in accounting.

>>I also have experience in relation to the use of the programs in accounting.

 ->accounting

>>Correct

 >>I am continuously improving my skills and knowledge and I always keep a smile on my face to help me have a good day at work and to help me connect with my workmates.

>>Correct

 -> to help me

>>Correct