Please ASAP 2
학생이 쓴 원문
2. some of sentecce I have added
- I’m a person that could respect the people around me whether they are older or [이름]er or what position they are in.
- And in aspect of my skill
I have a lot of experience in activities in and out of my University.
- I am continuously improving my skills and knowledge and I always keep a smile on my face to help me connect with my workmates
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
As a continuation,I can say that you did well in expressing your ideas.Keep it up.
-T.Faye-
2. some of sentecce I have added
>>Here are some of the sentences that I added.
- I’m a person that could respect the people around me whether they are older or [이름]er or what position they are in.
>>I am a person who respects the people around me whether they are older, [이름]er or whatever position they are in.
- And in aspect of my skill
I have a lot of experience in activities in and out of my University.
>>In respect to my skill, I have a lot of experiences in and out of my University.
- I am continuously improving my skills and knowledge and I always keep a smile on my face to help me connect with my workmates
>>Correct
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