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As the times change, English teaching methods have changed at the school but it still has kept the grammar translation method in the middle and the highschool because students have to take a exam and going to the good university. Whereas in the elementary school, almost English teaching methods has changed. The teachers use the power point presentation and role plays of the dialogue with their partner so the teachers let students speak in English over and over at the school. The result, students can use English with foreigner so these days, the teachers focused on the speaking part and the listening part. It is more important than grammar knowledge. In Korea, Many migrants, international marriage or international exchange have got growing, people feel that they have to use real-English ( conversation with someone) and it is important. So learners have to try to study real-English like speaking and listening English. So many students want to study English abroad for their English skill such like Working Holiday, English Camp and Language study abroad(short period of time) on their vacation so they can learn the language as well as the culture then they can used the English skill like getting jobs and having conversation with someone. Also, That's why many companies involved in the English books publish exciting conversation's books focused on the speaking part and listening part(because they feel to interact is very important ). These books are very popular in children and their parents These days, many modern men know that it is important to express in English. It is used by interact with foreigner in their life so they have to develop their English skill. For them, they have to express by themselves or practice communicating over and over and they need learn by negotiating meanings with others.

Hello, ms, Julia! I am sorry the correction was a bit delayed.. Please ask me in class if you have questions.. See you tomorrow..^^ T. Jennifer As the times change, English teaching methods have changed at the school but it still has kept the grammar translation method in the middle and the highschool because students have to take a exam and going to the good university. >> As the times change, the methods in teaching English have changed in schools but it still has kept the grammar translation method in middle and highschool because students have to take the National University Entrance Exam.   Whereas in the elementary school, almost English teaching methods has changed. >> Whereas in the elementary, almost teaching English methods have changed. The teachers use the power point presentation and role plays of the dialogue with their partner so the teachers let students speak in English over and over at the school. >>The teachers use the power point presentation and ask students to do role plays of the dialogue with a partner. This way the teachers let students speak in English over and over at the school. The result, students can use English with foreigner so these days, the teachers focused on the speaking part and the listening part. It is more important than grammar knowledge.>>The result is that students can use English when talking with foreigners. These days, the teachers focused on the speaking part and the listening part. It is more important than grammar knowledge.In Korea, Many migrants, international marriage or international exchange have got growing, people feel that they have to use real-English ( conversation with someone) and it is important. >>In Korea, migrants, international marriages or international exchanges have been growing and so people feel that they have to use real-English ( conversation with someone) and it is important. So learners have to try to study real-English like speaking and listening English. >> So learners have to try to study real-English like speaking in and listening to English. So many students want to study English abroad for their English skill such like Working Holiday, English Camp and Language study abroad(short period of time) on their vacation so they can learn the language as well as the culture then they can used the English skill like getting jobs and having conversation with someone. >> So many students want to study English abroad for their English skills. They go to foreign countries in many ways such as going on Working Holiday, English Camp and Language study abroad(short period of time) on their vacation so they can learn the language as well as the culture. After this, they can use their English skills in getting jobs and having conversation with someone. Also, That\'s why many companies involved in the English books publish exciting conversation\'s books focused on the speaking part and listening part(because they feel to interact is very important ). >>Also, that\'s why many companies involved in the publishing English books publish exciting conversation books focused on the speaking part and listening part(because they feel that to interact is very important ). These books are very popular in children and their parents >> These books are very popular among children and their parents. These days, many modern men know that it is important to express in English. >>These days, many modern men know that it is important to express oneself in English. It is used by interact with foreigner in their life so they have to develop their English skill. >>It is used in interacting with foreigners and so they have to develop their English skill. For them, they have to express by themselves or practice communicating over and over and they need learn by negotiating meanings with others. >>For them, they have to express themselves or practice communicating over and over and they need to learn by negotiating meanings with others.