Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

2024-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Which region of your country do you live in? I have been living in Dajeon, which is located in the middle of South Korea. Daejeon is very famous for a beautiful park called Hanbat Botanical Garden, so I can enjoy many beautiful things. In spring, I can see cherry blossoms and other beautiful flowers and in fall, I can enjoy colorful/autumn leaves. As you can guess, how beautiful it is! 6. Tell me about your hometown. à I have been living in Dajeon located in the middle of S. Korea. Daejeon is very famous for a beautiful park called Hanbat Botanical Garden, so I can enjoy many beautiful things. In spring, I can see cherry blossoms and other beautiful flowers and in fall, I can enjoy colorful leaves. As you can guess, how beautiful it is!

강사 첨삭

Thank you for entrusting me to simplify your answers Young In. I hope you\'ll be able to remember all these responses. You have similar answers to these two questions. Good luck!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

1. Which region of your country do you live in?

>>>I live in Daejeon, in the center of South Korea. Daejeon is famous for the beautiful Hanbat Botanical Garden, where I can enjoy nature. In spring, there are cherry blossoms and flowers, and in fall, colorful autumn leaves. It\'s truly beautiful!

6. Tell me about your hometown.
>>>I live in Daejeon, in the center of South Korea. Daejeon is famous for the beautiful Hanbat Botanical Garden, where I can enjoy nature. In spring, there are cherry blossoms and flowers, and in fall, colorful autumn leaves. It\'s truly beautiful!

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