Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

2024-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Have you seen an unforgettable and beautiful view or scenery? What is the view like around the place where you live? Yes, the view of Hanbat Arboretum from my house is unforgettable, especially in spring. The vibrant flowers and greenery create a beautiful landscape, and I’m happy to have such a lovely place nearby. When was the last time you laughed? Do you always laugh at funny things? Are you a person who often makes others laugh? Do you think you are a funny person? Do you enjoy watching interesting and funny movies? I laughed recently while watching a comedy movie with my friends. I enjoy laughing at funny things, and I try to make others laugh too, although I wouldn’t consider myself a funny person. I love watching funny movies to relax and have fun.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for entrusting me to simplify your answers Young In. I hope you\'ll be able to remember all these responses. Good luck!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Have you seen an unforgettable and beautiful view or scenery?
What is the view like around the place where you live?
>>>The view of Hanbat Arboretum from my house is amazing, especially in spring with all the flowers and greenery. I\'m lucky to have such a beautiful place nearby.

When was the last time you laughed?

Do you always laugh at funny things?
Are you a person who often makes others laugh?
Do you think you are a funny person?
Do you enjoy watching interesting and funny movies?
>>>I laughed recently while watching a comedy movie with my friends. I enjoy laughing and trying to make others laugh, but I’m not really a funny person. I like watching comedy movies to relax and have fun.

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