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The rest of sentences which need a grammatical correction. 01 Buddhism stares and heals your mind. Buddhism broadcast help you find the way for your inner mind. Over 20years Buddhism broadcast has been leading broadcasting system and we start built up temple broadcast system... 02 What a loss! Father! Everybody say, what a loss! Have you done enough? Then, please finish at this point of time. Don't you give a word something? What? 03 On Monday September ninth, the first selected song is Blondie's 'call me'

Hello there [이름]! Good evening!^^ Thank you so much for sharing this. Anyway, I can see the eagerness you have to improve. Just keep on practicing as well as learn new vocabularies that can equip you in constructing better sentences. Just be more cautious of the verb tenses and the proper use of prepositions. Furthermore, I know that you can do better! Keep up the good work! Enjoy your time now! See you in our class. ~~ T. Abby ~~ 01Buddhism stares and heals your mind. >> Buddhism calms and heals your mind. Buddhism broadcast help you find the way for your inner mind. >> Buddhist broadcast helps you find inner peace. Over 20years Buddhism broadcast has been leading broadcasting system and we start built up temple broadcast system...>> Over 20 years, Buddhist broadcast has been leading in the broadcasting industry and started to build temples. OR> For over 20 years now, Buddhist broadcast has been the leading broadcasting industry which started to build temples. 02 What a loss! Father! >> Correct Everybody say, what a loss! >> Everybody says, what a loss!Have you done enough? >> Correct Then, please finish at this point of time. >> Then please finish at this point in time. OR> Then please finish it at this point in time.Don\'t you give a word something? >> Don\'t you give a word or something? OR> Won\'t you give a word or something?What?>> Correct 03On Monday September ninth, the first selected song is Blondie\'s \'call me\' >> On Monday, September 9th, the first selected song was Blondie\'s \'Call Me\'. OR> On Monday, September 9th, the first requested song was \'Call Me\' by Blondie.