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Hello [이름]

A very exciting day to you! Thank you so much in submitting your homework.

Keep practicing on your grammar and you\'ll see that you\'ll have improvements that you don\'t even notice at all. ^^
\"In learning to know other things and other minds, we become more intimately acquainted with ourselves, and are to ourselves better worth knowing.\"
-Philip Gilbert Hamilton

See you in our class! Sweet day!

-T.Jeny

What are your pastimes?

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 my pastime is to enjoy outdoor activities. hiking mountains, rumming and surf.

>>I enjoy outdoor activities like hiking the mountains, roaming and surfing as my pastime.
 every summer from 2 years ago i\'m learning to surf. 

>>I\'ve been learning how to surf for 2 years every summer.
 one of my acquaintance recommended me. 

>>On of my acquaintances recommended it to me. 
 In a first time i ate a lot of water, but i still practice and practice. so i can ride surf in small waves.

>>At first, I drunk a lot of water but I didn\'t give up. I practiced a lot and I can surf on small waves now.
 whenever i surf, i feel like to be fly. i feel amuse and pleasant.
>>I feel I am flying whenever I surf which make me feel amazed and pleased.
What\'s your favorite movie?

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 i recently watched a movie named \"The notebook\". 

>>I recently watched a movie named, \"The Notebook\". 
 do you know Ryan Gosling ? he is the main character.

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i think he seems to be good at romance acting.

>>I think, he seems to be good at romance.
 and when i watched it, i thought i wanted to resemble his strong spirit.

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In his script, \" What do you want?!, Stop thinking about trying to make others feel better!\"

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i realized trust and love myself , and i thought about caring for my feelings first. and then i will give people more love.

>>I realized that I have to trust and love myself  and I thought about caring for my feelings first then I can love other people more.
 this movie is so romantic and lovely. so i want to recommend it.

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