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what are your fondest childhood memories?

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 : my fondest childhood memory is time with my family.

>>My fondest childhood memory is spending time with my family.
 I did many things with my family.

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We often go on a travel, play in the sea, and climb mountains.

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was happy to have a good time together.

>>I feel happy having good times together.
 and In December, we always decorate our christmas tree ..with stars,ball and our letters.

>>In December, we always decorate our Christmas tree with stars, balls and letters.
 i think everything with my family is my fondest childhood memory.
>>I think, all moments spent with my family is the fondest memory I have.
what are the most important things your parents taught you?

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 : my parents taught me, \"think about the future and always look far away.\" 

>>My parents taught me to always think about the future and dream high.
 instead of thinking right away, think about five or ten years later and plan.

>>Instead of thinking right away, think about it five or ten years later and  make a plan.
 this is helping me in my life.^^
>>This is helping my life nowadays.
what are the things that usually make you upset?

>>What are the things that usually makes you upset?
 : i think.. when i see rude and selfish people, i\'m not good.
>>I think, whenever I see rude and selfish people, I usually don\'t feel good.
For example, healthy people sit in pregnant women seats on the subway or someone rude to older people and
people that think of only own interests among friends, I\'m not good.

>>For example, when a healthy person is sitting on the PWD seats on the subway, or when someone only thinks about their own interests.
 we need to understand, respect and love each other.

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