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Hello [이름],
I know that this activity could really enhance your skills in English. Just believe in yourself that you can achieve your goals in speaking the English language.
T. Jeny
what do you think is the most important atitude at work?
>>What do you think is the most important attitude at work?
the most important attitude is to work open-minded.
>>The most important attitude at work is to be open-minded.
always try to learn something that help you work.
>>Always try to learn something new that will help you at work.
In this way , i can be happily and develop more.
>>In this way, I can be happy and I can develop myself more.
can you name three jobs you can good at?
>>Can you name three jobs you can be good at?
Flight attendant, writer, phsychological counseler.
>>The three jobs that I can be good at are being a flight attendant, a writer, and psychological counselor.
the flight attendant has been my dream since i was young.
>>Being a flight attendant has been my dream since I was young.
i think this joc gets never boring.they always meet new people, new circumstances and new culture.
>>I think this job never gets boring because they always meet new people, new circumstances and new cultures.
I like these things.
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OR>>I like this kind of things.
the second reason why i chose a writer is because i like writing. so there are many sentences in my notebook.
>>The reason why I chose becoming a writer is because I like writing so I always write on my notebook.
the third reason why i chose a psychological counseler is because i\'m good listener and i want to take care of people with psycological pain.
>>As for my third choice, I chose psychological counselor because I am a good listener and I want to understand people\'s emotions.
i traveled to vietnam for 5days. the warm weather was so good. and i hear a lot of horns. it was a bit noisy.
>>I traveled to Vietnam for 5 days. The warm weather was good though it was a bit noisy because of the horns coming from the motorcycles.
exterior of the house is beautifully decorated with flowers. it\'s romantic.
>>The exterior of the houses were beautifully decorated with flowers. It was romantic.( It made the atmosphere romantic.)
it\'s first time to eat fruit, it\'s mane is mangosteen. i don\'t think i\'ll forget
>>It was my first to eat a fruit named mangosteen. I will never forget that fruit.
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