Please check intention as below

2014-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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I have received from our customer as below; I'm confusing his intention and please check and give me advice for me. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear [Name].Park , As discussed during our APQP meeting . Regarding qty requirement for our engg trial as follows 1) 1.2L gasoline - 370Nos 2) 1.2L diesel - 370Nos Pl send the confirmation . Pl plan this in your 18th Feb14 schedule. VP Build qty 110 nos pl. hold till Mar2014 , we will send VP schedule

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Happy Tuesday to you!

Thank you so much for sending in your composition today.

I really appreciate it. Anyway, with regards to the content of the mail, it was not quite clear as to his intention.

But as I can see it, he needs your confirmation for the requirements mentioned.

If you have any further questions, don\'t hesitate to ask me during our class. See you later.

~T. Lexi

I have received from our customer as below;
>>I have received from our customer the mail below.
I\'m confusing his intention and please check and give me advice for me.

>>I\'m confused with his intention, so please check it and give me an advice.
 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dear [Name].Park ,
>>Correct
As discussed during our APQP meeting .
Regarding qty requirement for our engg trial as follows

>>As discussed during our APQP meeting, the quantity requirement for our engineering trial are as follows:
 1) 1.2L gasoline - 370Nos 

>>Correct
 2) 1.2L diesel - 370Nos 

>>Correct
 Pl send the confirmation . Pl plan this in your 18th Feb14 schedule. 

>>Please send me the confirmation. Please include this in your schedule for the 18th meeting on February 14.
 VP B
uild qty 110 nos pl. hold till Mar2014 , we will send VP schedule

>>Please hold on the VP Build quantity 110 Nos until we send you the VP schedule.

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