Please check my diary grammar and sentence!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, i went to the hospital because i ahd a cold.
Nowadays, In Korea we are prevalent the flu so many people in hospital, i was wait for a while.
After arrived at home, i ate budaejjigae , i didn\'t made it is meal kit!
Today i stayed at home after went hospital, so today was so happy day!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there Anna~!^^ So you have started writing your diary? That\'s a good decision to improve your English skills! Enjoy learning written and spoken English Anna! Get well soon too!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Today, i went to the hospital because i ahd a cold.
>>> Today, I went to the hospital because I caught a cold.
Nowadays, In Korea we are prevalent the flu so many people in hospital, i was wait for a while.
>>> Nowadays, in Korea, flu is prevalent so many people go to the hospital. I waited for a while.
After arrived at home, i ate budaejjigae , i didn\'t made it is meal kit!
>>> After arriving home, I ate Budae Jjigae. I didn\'t make it, it\'s a meal kit!
Today i stayed at home after went hospital, so today was so happy day!!
Nowadays, In Korea we are prevalent the flu so many people in hospital, i was wait for a while.
>>> Nowadays, in Korea, flu is prevalent so many people go to the hospital. I waited for a while.
After arrived at home, i ate budaejjigae , i didn\'t made it is meal kit!
>>> After arriving home, I ate Budae Jjigae. I didn\'t make it, it\'s a meal kit!
Today i stayed at home after went hospital, so today was so happy day!!
>>> I went home after going to the hospital. Today was a happy day!
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