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Write a composition about Message in a Bottle: If you were stranded on a deserted island and could send out one message in a bottle, what would you write in that message, and why would you write those particular things? I'll write my lover a letter. talking the situation I'm in, I'll ask him a way which could look for and save me. As the letter may be the last message, I'll tell him the truth that how much I love and thank him. While we are the most important person each other, I have to send him the last message.

Hello [이름]!! Thank you for doing your homework.I appreciate it a lot.Maybe we can still talk about this in class because your thoughts are amazing.Have a nice day! ~Teacher Nina~ Write a composition about Message in a Bottle: If you were stranded on a deserted island and could send out one message in a bottle, what would you write in that message, and why would you write those particular things?I\'ll write my lover a letter. >>I\'ll write a letter to my lover. talking the situation I\'m in, I\'ll ask him a way which could look for and save me. >>I will tell about my situation I\'m in. I\'ll ask him for a way to save me. As the letter may be the last message, I\'ll tell him the truth that how much I love and thank him. >>If the letter will be my last message, I\'ll tell him how much I love him and I will thank him for everything. While we are the most important person each other, I have to send him the last message. >>He is the most important person in my life, so I will send him the last message.