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Write about the best birthday you ever had. Describe what made it so special. Although every birthday were similar, I remember the special one but it was the worst not the best. All school in korea have a summer vacation in August. As my birthday is in August so, during my school days, I wasn't celebrated from a lot of friends. Becoming high school student, we had to go to school during holiday to have supplementary lessons. Almost all students didn't like it but I expected it because of my birthday. when I was third year, it had typoon which was very huge and serious and gave us much heavy rain on the day before my birthday. As a result, my school wasn't able to open next day, namely my birthday. I got a celebrates from my friends only by telephone and killed the time at home by myself. it was a pity at that time but now, it became a funny memory.

Hello there [이름]~~ A wonderful Monday afternoon!It was indeed a funny story.Things do happen unexpectedly! kkk Anyway, even if they just greeted you on the phone, the most important things is that at least they remembered your birthday that time. :) Thanks for the composition. I enjoyed reading it! :) Please check the corrections I made for you.Have a nice day and see you in class~~ T.Nina Write about the best birthday you ever had. Describe what made it so special.Although every birthday were similar, I remember the special one but it was the worst not the best. >>Although all birthdays are the same, I remember that one special birthday which is the worst not the best.All school in korea have a summer vacation in August. As my birthday is in August so, during my school days, I wasn\'t celebrated from a lot of friends. >>All schools in Korea have Summer vacation in August. Since my birthday is in August, I never celebrated my birthday with a lot of friends during my school days. Becoming high school student, we had to go to school during holiday to have supplementary lessons. >>When I became a High School student, we had to go to school even during holidays to have supplementary lessons. Almost all students didn\'t like it but I expected it because of my birthday. >>CORRECT!! >>Almost all students didn\'t like it but I was excited about it because of my birthday. when I was third year, it had typoon which was very huge and serious and gave us much heavy rain on the day before my birthday. >>When I was in my third year, there was a very serious and strong typhoon the day before my birthday. As a result, my school wasn\'t able to open next day, namely my birthday. >>As a result, the classes were cancelled the following day, that was my birthday. I got a celebrates from my friends only by telephone and killed the time at home by myself. >>I was greeted by my friends only on the telephone and killed the time at home alone. it was a pity at that time but now, it became a funny memory. >>CORRECT!!