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I think \"weird\" in Korean is \"gimyohan\". I\'m not sure. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
Of course, I think it\'s possible.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Yes. It is possible.
Particularly, It connot be divided in modern times.
>> Particularly, gender roles are now present in modern times.
>> What do you mean by your sentence?
In other words, a farther should do the duty of a mother and
a mother should do the duty of a father.
>> A father can do mother\'s duties and vice versa.
For example, a father can take care of a baby and
all the household affairs.
>> For instance, a father can take care of a baby and can do household chores.
a mother also can work in a company.
>> A mother can also work in a company.
n the future, their duty will not be made a division.
>> In the future, there will possibly be no more divisions.
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