Please check my interview script 3
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Give your opinion on current economic trends. /
Tell me about the effects of the Corona situation on the industry.
Today\'s corona19 crisis results in the costs for disaster recovery and the opportunity cost. It brings contraction of economic activity and decrease of private consumption and investment. The government\'s interest rate decrease policy and currency swaps are appropriate policies, even though it’s limited. We have a concern about how to recover from the decline in the value of the currency. We should also worry about the insolvency of household loans. And we can expect increase of demand for stocks and automobiles as substitutes.
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Hello there Ken!
Today\'s corona 19 crisis results in the costs for disaster recovery and the opportunity cost.
This is for script 3.
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Give your opinion on current economic trends.
Tell me about the effects of the Corona situation on the industry.
Today\'s corona 19 crisis results in the costs for disaster recovery and the opportunity cost.
>>CORRECT
It brings contraction of economic activity and decrease of private consumption and investment.
>>CORRECT
The government\'s interest rate decrease policy and currency swaps are appropriate policies, even though it’s limited.
>>The government\'s interest rate decrease , policy and currency swaps are appropriate, even though it’s limited.
We have a concern about how to recover from the decline in the value of the currency.
>>CORRECT
We should also worry about the insolvency of household loans.
>>CORRECT
And we can expect increase of demand for stocks and automobiles as substitutes.
>>We can expect and increase in the demand for stocks and automobiles as substitutes.
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