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1.Your kids are too strepitous. 2.I was nuts about Hyunbin, but now I'm totally nuts about Lim Siwan. 3.The three qualities that I look for in my country's leader. First, reliablity is the most quality of president. People who keeps one's word shoud be chosen as a president. The second important quality is the ability to empathize and communicate with people. People who has an emphathetic sense can read the ordinary people's mind, and administer the state affairs for the ordinary people. The last thing is the view of the world. How he think about the politics, the economy, the relationship with the North Korea will debide our 5 years from now. 4.I went to the hair shop. I had my hair done. I got my haif straightened. 5.I have had on to my waved hair too long. So it's new and good. 6.The weekend is too short and the working day is too long. 7.He always paltered about our relationship. 8.I'm likely to be out of lunch due to that patient. 9.I got stressed by my coworker, so I binged after working. 10.The man who I love is one smart cookie. 11.The sofa I ordered on last week delivered yesterday. 12.I was looking forward this sofa. It was better than I thought. 13.Four working days remain until weekend. 14.This topic is all about sleep hours of today's people. 15.I usually sleep more than 8 hours on weekday, and more than 10 hours on weekend. 16.I feel refreshed when I get enough sleep. While I can't concentrate on my work when I don't get enough sleep. 17.When I was a university student, I often stayed up all night. It's OK at that time. 18.But now I must get enough sleep, otherwise I cannot work on next day. 19.My coworkers also must get enough sleep by the same token. 20.We can know whether or not we got enough sleep on last night. 21.The amount of sleep acquired by us certainly affects our workplace. 22.My father talked about his memento of ring. 23.Don't be that censorious, then give me your opinion. 24.Look at this cute boy who has the peach puzz. 25.The title of a poem is "The meditation about a Hamburger". 26.It tells the way to meditate during cooking a hamburger. 27.I would have to reduce watching the TV. It is difficult to me because it is the only thing that I can enjoy at weekday night. 28.But I will be able to fit in more time for sleep only if I have to reduce watching the TV. 29.Tell me approximately how much you earned by selling umbrallas during summer season. 30.I was not able to go to the club yesterday due to my boyfriend's interference. 31.An Chulsu affected my view of the world.

Hi Ms. [이름]! I checked your sentences here. Please review my corrections. Have a good night! Talk to you tomorrow! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.Your kids are too strepitous. >> CORRECT2.I was nuts about Hyunbin, but now I\'m totally nuts about Lim Siwan. >> CORRECT **Me too! I love Siwan! ^^3.The three qualities that I look for in my country\'s leader. >> CORRECT OR >> The three qualities that I look for in my country\'s leader are as follows:First, reliablity is the most quality of president. >> First is reliability.People who keeps one\'s word shoud be chosen as a president. >> A person who can keep his word should be the president.The second important quality is the ability to empathize and communicate with people. >> CORRECTA person who has an emphathetic sense can read ordinary people\'s mind and administer the state affairs for ordinary people. >> CORRECTThe last thing is the view of the world. >> Last is his view/perception of the world.How he thinks about the politics, the economy and the relationship with the North Korea will decide what will happen to our country 5 years from now. >> CORRECT4.I went to the hair shop. I had my hair done. I got my hair straightened. >> CORRECT5.I have had on to my waved hair too long. So it\'s new and good. >> I\'ve had a wavy hair for too long. So my new hairstyle is better.6.The weekend is too short and the working day is too long. >> CORRECT OR >> Weekdays are too long.7.He always paltered about our relationship. >> CORRECT8.I\'m likely to be out of lunch due to that patient. >> I\'m likely to miss lunch due to that patient.9.I got stressed by my coworker, so I binged after working. >> CORRECT10.The man who I love is one smart cookie. >> CORRECT OR >> The man that I love is one smart cookie.11.The sofa I ordered last week was delivered yesterday. >> CORRECT12.I was looking forward to having this sofa. It was better than I thought. >> CORRECT13.Four working days remain until weekend. >> There are still four working days before the weekend.14.This topic is all about sleep hours of today\'s people. >> This topic is all about the sleeping hours of people today.They usually sleepfor more than 8 hours on weekdays, and more than 10 hours on weekends. >> CORRECT16.I feel refreshed when I get enough sleep. While I can\'t concentrate on my work when I don\'t get enough sleep. >> CORRECT17.When I was a university student, I often stayed up all night. It\'s OK at that time. >> CORRECT18.But now I must get enough sleep, otherwise I cannot work on the next day. >> CORRECT19.My coworkers also must get enough sleep by the same token. >>My coworkers must also get enough sleep.20.We can know whether or not we got enough sleep on last night. >> We will find out whether or not we got enough sleep last night.21.The amount of sleep acquired by us certainly affects our workplace. >> CORRECT22.My father talked about his memento of a ring. >> CORRECT23.Don\'t be that censorious, just give me your opinion. >> CORRECT24.Look at this cute boy who has the peach fuzz.>> Look at this cute boy! He is such a peach fuzz. 25.The title of the poem is \"The meditation about a Hamburger\". >> CORRECT26.It tells the way to meditate during cooking a hamburger. >> It talks about how to meditate while cooking a hamburger.27.I would have to reduce watching TV. It is difficult for me because it is the only thing that I can enjoy on a weekday night. >> CORRECT28.But I will be able to fit in more time for sleep only if I can reduce watching TV. >> CORRECT29.Tell me approximately how much you earned by selling umbrellas during the summer season. >> CORRECT30.I was not able to go to the club yesterday due to my boyfriend\'s interference. >> CORRECT31.An Chulsu affected my view of the world. >> CORRECT OR >> An Chulsu affected my point of view about the world.