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1.We are able to know whether or not we all got enough sleep last night. 2.My mon sometimes delves in my bag when I'm not home. 3.It's not a piece of cake to deal with a patient. 4.I slept right after work, because I felt exhausted yesterday. 5.I would have to say that you should not to be absent from the class. 6.I would have to stop drinking a liquol. 7.I don't want to date you any further. 8.My new house is further from the company than my former house. 9.I have been healed by listening to the music. And I heard that the music can grow the plant. The power of music is so amazing. 10.Your talk about her is too turgid. 11.It's dangerous to put all of your eggs in one basket. 12.I'm gonna a cafe to study English and read a book in a long time on Saturday. And I'm gonna participate in a reading club for the first time on Sunday. 13.It's the collection of poems that I have read from 2 days ago. The book tells the way to meditate while cooking a hamburger. 14.I have heard ab

Hi Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sending in your composition. Here are my corrections, check them out. Talk to you tomorrow! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.We are able to know whether or not we all got enough sleep last night. >> We will be able to know whether or not we all got enough sleep last night.2.My mon sometimes delves in my bag when I\'m not home. >> CORRECT *Spelling: mon - mom3.It\'s not a piece of cake to deal with a patient. >> CORRECT4.I slept right after work, because I felt exhausted yesterday. >> CORRECT5.I would have to say that you should not to be absent from the class. >> I would have to tell you not to be absent from class.6.I would have to stop drinking a liquol. >> I would have to stop drinking liquor.7.I don\'t want to date you any further. >> CORRECT8.My new house is further from the company than my former house. >> CORRECT OR >> My new house is farther from the company than my old house.9.I have been healed by listening to music. >> CORRECT And I heard that the music can grow the plant. >> I also heard that music can help the plant grow. The power of music is so amazing. >> CORRECT10.Your talk about her is too turgid. >> The way you talk about her is too turgid.11.It\'s dangerous to put all of your eggs in one basket. >> CORRECT12.I\'m gonna a cafe to study English and read a book in a long time on Saturday. >> I\'m going to a cafe this Saturday to study English and read a book for a long time. And I\'m gonna participate in a reading club for the first time on Sunday.>> CORRECT 13.It\'s the collection of poems that I have read 2 days ago. >> CORRECT The book tells the way to meditate while cooking a hamburger. >> The books tells us a way on how to meditate while cooking a hamburger.