Please check my writing. ^^

1.I have heard about my fortune from a fortune teller. And I have read about it on Internet web site. 2.I seek a fortune teller for fun. 3.I don't know as yet. But I may be going to seek advice from a fortune teller for marriage or seperation of my position in the future. 4.Many young people have sought a fortune teller, especially a taro fortune teller these days. I used to go to a taro fortune teller, too. 5.Knowledge that we can't gain from books is of course exist. But we cannot experience everything. We can gain knowledge from books when we can't experiece. So both are necessary for us to gain knowledge. 6.I will go to that reading club every other sunday. 7.I'm irritated because I ate 3 plates for lunch yesterday. And then I regretted. I seemed to get 2 kg, I think. I decided that I will never overeat. 8.Korean tradition is related with superstition. And another reason is that Korean people tend to follow as a trend, as the other people do. That's why it is popular in Korea. 9.Today's people need someone to rely on. They want to hear anything about their pain, difficulty, and uncertain future. Wherther a fortune teller's talk is real or not, they must be helpful for today's people in a degree. 10.An Chulsu is sought after by Korean people. 11.This sentence is crucial to solve this quiz. 12.I won't overeat from now on, I promise. 13.I won't talk with you any further. 14.Why don't you apologize about this matter? 15.I don't also work as long as you don't do.

Hello Ms. [이름]! I checked your sentences here. Hmmm. Some of them are like old sentences already. I think I might have checked them in your previous compositions. ^^ Anyway, have a good night! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.I have heard about my fortune from a fortune teller. >> CORRECT And I have read about it on Internet web site. >> I have read about it from an Internet web site too.2.I seek a fortune teller for fun. >> I only seek fortune tellers for fun.3.I don\'t know as yet. >> I don\'t know yet. But I may be going to seek advice from a fortune teller for marriage or seperation of my position in the future. >> But I might be going to a fortune teller to seek advice about marriage or separation in the future.4.Many young people have sought a fortune teller, especially a taro fortune teller these days. >> Many young people sought a fortune teller nowadays, particularly a taro fortune teller. I used to go to a taro fortune teller, too. >> CORRECT5.Knowledge that we can\'t gain from books is of course exist. >> Knowledge that we can\'t gain from books do exist. But we cannot experience everything. >> CORRECT We can gain knowledge from books when we can\'t experiece. >> We can gain knowledge from books if we can\'t experience it. So both are necessary for us to gain knowledge. >> CORRECT6.I will go to that reading club every other Sunday. >> CORRECT7.I\'m irritated because I ate 3 plates for lunch yesterday. >> I\'m irritated because I ate 3 dishes for lunch yesterday. And then I regretted. I seemed to get 2 kg, I think. I decided that I will never overeat. >> I regretted it afterwards. I seemed to have gained 2 kg. I decided that I will never overeat again.8.Korean tradition is related with superstition. >> Korean tradition is full of superstition. And another reason is that Korean people tend to follow this as a trend, the way other people do. That\'s why it is popular in Korea. >> CORRECT9.Today\'s people need someone to rely on. >> CORRECT They want to hear everything about their pain, difficulty and their uncertain future. >> CORRECT Whether a fortune teller\'s talk is real or not, they must be helpful for today\'s people in a degree. >> Whether what a fortune teller says is real or not, they must still be helpful to some people on a certain degree.10.An Chulsu is sought after by Korean people. >> CORRECT11.This sentence is crucial to solve this quiz. >> CORRECT12.I won\'t overeat from now on, I promise. >> CORRECT13.I won\'t talk with you any further. >> CORRECT14.Why don\'t you apologize about this matter? >> CORRECT15.I don\'t also work as long as you don\'t do. >> I won\'t work as long as you don\'t do too.