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This is writing essays for doing Toeic exam. Please check my writing. Thank you^^ Q. What do you think a cadidate should do to prepare for getting a job? Use specific examples and details to support you answer. A; I know many people are preparing something for getting a job. Accoding to the job, it is different to prepare things But now I'll describe common things to getting a job. First of all A major study is th best important thing. If you majored in engineer(This is my case), you leared about chemical, mechanical, electronical etc. So you can find employment at manufacture company. If you don't have knowledge relating engineering, you'll give up your job. So I think major study is important to finding a job. The remainder writing is next day writing practice.

Hi there,      Thank you for sending your composition. I really appreciate your effort in preparing for your TOEIC test. Do your best! Aja! See you later. Love, Verna This is writing essays for doing Toeic exam. >> This essay writing is for TOEIC exam preparation.Please check my writing. >>Please check my composition.Thank you^^>>CorrectQ. What do you think a cadidate should do to prepare for getting a job? >>CorrectUse specific examples and details to support you answer.>>CorrectA; I know many people are preparing something for getting a job. >>A; I know many people are preparing something to get a job.Accoding to the job, it is different to prepare things >> The preparation depends on the job.But now I'll describe common things to getting a job. >>But now I'm going to describes the  common things as a preparation to getting a job.First of all A major study is th best important thing.  >>First of all, studying your major is the most important thing.  If you majored in engineer(This is my case), you leared about chemical, mechanical, electronical etc.  >>If you majored Engineering(This is my case), you learned about chemical, mechanical, electrical etc.  So you can find employment at manufacture company.  >>So you can find employment in a manufacturing company. If you don't have knowledge relating engineering, you'll give up your job. >>If you don't have knowledge related to Engineering, you'll give up your job.So I think major study is important to finding a job.>>So I think studying your major is important in finding a job.The remainder writing is next day writing practice. >> The remaining writing will be for the next day's writing practice.