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Q: What aspects of cross-cultural relocation and life are you most passionate about?
A; Especially, I have interested Missionary Kids(MKs) and counseled them.

>> I am really interested in Missionary Kids(MKs) and have counseled them before.

There are many MKs in Korea, but research, books, programs for them are few.

>> Correct

Though many MKs are in trouble due to frequent moving, economic difficulties, living separated from their parents, etc, many people doesn\'t know well their hardships.

>> Did you mean: Though many MKs are in trouble due to frequent moving, economic difficulties, living separated from their parents, etc, many people don\'t know well about their hardships.

So, I hope that many more people will become understand and interested in MKs through my research, books, etc.

>> So, I hope that more people will understand and become interested in MKs through my research, books, etc.

>> OR: I hope that more people will become interested and understand MKs through my research, books, etc.

And I am interested in acculturation when people move to other countries.

>> Correct

The acculturation will be more important because the adaptation to a new set of culture can happen to anyone on account of high transnational mobility, change of multicultural society. 

>> Correct 

>> Better:  The acculturation will be more important because the adaptation to a new set of culture can happen to anyone on account of high transnational mobility and change of multicultural society. 
Q:Anything else youd like us to know about you?/

A:I\'m very looking forward to participate in FIGT conference.

>> I\'m looking forward to participate in the FIGT conference.

In there,I believe that many seminseminar, presentation, etc will make grow up in this intercultural field.

>>  Did you mean: I believe that there are many seminars, presentations, etc, that will help me grow in studying other cultures.