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Hello Charry. This is official email to Iran gov. Please check whether there are errors and suggest better expressions. Always thanks for your help. ----------------------------------------------------------- Dear [Name]. [Name] and Fahimeh, Hope this email finds you well. My name is [Name] Yun, education supervisor, working for NIIED(National Institute for International Education) under Minstry of Education in Rep. of Korea. I am responsible for organizing 13 Korean universities' visit to Iran with Ms. [Name](from Korean Embassy in Teheran) on behalf of my country. Thank you very much for your reply regarding organizing 13 Iraninan and Korean universities' meeting at MSRT. In order to help your detail plan on 19th Oct, I am sending a brief information of participants from Korea side. (to be continued to Aug 22)

Hello Charry. >> Hello, Charry. This is official email to Iran gov. >> This is an official email to the Iranian government. Please check whether there are errors and suggest better expressions. >> CORRECT! >> Please check whether there are errors in this email and suggest better expressions. Always thanks for your help. >> I am always thankful for your help. -----------------------------------------------------------Dear [Name]. [Name] and Fahimeh,>> CORRECT!Hope this email finds you well.>> We hope this email finds you well. OR >> We hope that you are doing great when you receive this email.My name is [Name] Yun, education supervisor, working for NIIED(National Institute for International Education) under Minstry of Education in Rep. of Korea.>> My name is [Name] Yun, and I am working for NIIED (National Institute for International Education) as an education supervisor under the minstry of education in the republic of Korea. I am responsible for organizing 13 Korean universities\' visit to Iran with Ms. [Name](from Korean Embassy in Teheran) on behalf of my country.>> I am responsible for organizing thirteen Korean universities\' visit to Iran and I am working on this project with Ms. [Name] who is from the Korean embassy in Teheran, on behalf of our country.OR >> I am responsible for organizing the visit of thirteen Korean universities in Iran and I am working on this project with Ms. [Name] who is from the Korean embassy in Teheran, on behalf of our country.Thank you very much for your reply regarding organizing 13 Iraninan and Korean universities\' meeting at MSRT.>> Thank you very much for your reply regarding the organization of thirteen Iraninan and Korean universities\' meeting at MSRT. OR >> We would like to thank you for immediately sending a response in relation to the organization of the meeting at MSRT for the thirteen Iraninan and Korean universities. In order to help your detail plan on 19th Oct, I am sending a brief information of participants from Korea side.>> In order to help in your detail plan on the 19th of October, I am sending a brief information about the participants from Korea\'s side.OR >> In order to help in your detail plan on the 19th of October, I am sending a brief information about the participants we will be sending from Korea.