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1. I want to make a group with balanced sexuality, which literaly means half is man and half is woman 2. I'd like to live in democratic countries because I can't do whatever i want to do without permission of the government if i live in comunist countries.

Hello JO!!! It's so nice to hear from you! First and foremost, I would like to congratulate  you for you have been improving very well with your English skill. For this reason, I do believe in your ability and in due time, you will be very skilled in English, just persevere and believe in yourself!!!...^^~~***....T.MELYNA...   My corrections for your composition are as follows: 1. I want to make a group with balanced sexuality, >>>I want to make a group in the society where there is balanced sexuality which literaly means half is man and half is woman>>> which literally means that one half of the group are men, while the other half are women.2. I'd like to live in democratic countries >>>CORRECT!!! because I can't do whatever i want to do without permission of the government if i live in comunist countries. >>>because if I live in communist countries, I always need to ask permission from the government with whatever I will do, even for the things that I want.