please check this for me
학생이 쓴 원문
The reason being is that natural disasters didnt strike very often
strike of natural disaster are going to accelerate the more each year
From the experience that i had gone to indonesia, i got a clue about what i truely want to do in my life
To teacher melyna.
last class I asked your facebook address. you can find me by checking my name so please add me on your facebook and request me.
my full name is Jo [이름][이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You did a good job in writing this composition. I noticed a few mistakes. I hope you뭠l have a great evening!
T.Melyna
The reason being is that natural disasters didnt strike very often.
The reason being is that natural disaster don't strike very often.strike of natural disaster are going to accelerate the more each year.
The occurrence of natural disaster is going to accelerate in the coming years.From the experience that i had gone to indonesia, i got a clue about what i truely want to do in my life
From what I had experience in Indonesia, I had a clue about what I trully want to do in my life.
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