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Hi teacher Ms. [Name]\'s topic was introduce myself, therfore I had some premind and pretinking about this matter.
However after speaking start I had many difficulty and mis expression for my self indroduce for expample the oder of sentences
and good expression was run a way when actual speaking morment.
I thnk it will getting better by experience and adaption after quite long time .
As you know I am not ablt to get studing or intelligence altogether withinn sorttime due to elder brain, therfore you have to consider
about this matter and hope your kind cooperation.
Please check your mail site the message goes well but sometime another site ( not naver site) ths photors not show up on mail page
as sending.
Have nice week end X CAVOK
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Hello, Cavok!
I appreciate you in sending me your composition.
I also appreciate you for doing your best in class.
Yes, there might have been some parts when you forgot the terms or expressions or made a mistake.
But, that\'s okay. Always remember that making mistakes is actually a part of learning.
As you said, it will get better with experience and adaptation.
When we keep on practicing the English language and we show passion in it, definitely, everything will be better.
So, don\'t be hard on yourself. You did well tonight. You\'re just starting. You can do it!
I believe in you.
And don\'t worry, I will always be patient and considerate. I promised that I will be helping you, right? ^^
I also saw the page you sent me and it was beautiful.
By the way, I also sent you a reply. ^^
The beautiful scenery seen on the photos make me feel happy and light.
Again, thank you about that.
Have a nice weekend!
~Teacher Gina
Today\'s topic was introduce myself, therfore I had some premind and pretinking about this matter.
>> Today\'s topic was to introduce myself. Therefore, I had some preparations done in my mind about this matter.
However after speaking start I had many difficulty and mis expression for my self indroduce for expample the oder of sentences and good expression was run a way when actual speaking morment.
>> However, after I started speaking, I had many difficulties and wrong expressions in introducing my self. For example, the order of sentences and good expression ran away when I was actually speaking in that moment.
I thnk it will getting better by experience and adaption after quite long time .
>> I think it will get better with experience and adaptation after quite a long time.
As you know I am not ablt to get studing or intelligence altogether withinn sorttime due to elder brain, therfore you have to consider about this matter and hope your kind cooperation.
I thnk it will getting better by experience and adaption after quite long time .
>> I think it will get better with experience and adaptation after quite a long time.
As you know I am not ablt to get studing or intelligence altogether withinn sorttime due to elder brain, therfore you have to consider about this matter and hope your kind cooperation.
>> As you know, I am not able to learn or gain intelligence within a short time due to my brain as an elderly. Therefore, you have to consider about this matter and I hope for your kind consideration.
Please check your mail site the message goes well but sometime another site ( not naver site) ths photors not show up on mail page as sending.
Please check your mail site the message goes well but sometime another site ( not naver site) ths photors not show up on mail page as sending.
>> Please check the message on your mail site to see if it was sent well because some other sites (not naver), doesn\'t show the page as sending.
Have nice week end X CAVOK
Have nice week end X CAVOK
>>CORRECT.
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