Please correc the awkward sentence and grammer for notice below

Hello Tk,

The week is over. I\'m actually surprised about how fast time is passing. Do you feel the same way?

You did great in class today! I will never get tired of hearing the stories you share with me.

Thank you See you in our next class.

Dear all,

>> Dear All Employees,

>>To All Employees, 
Please be aware that all visitors like contractors, customers, and other BW RU employees as well should be escorted by SWTS employee in charge of them based on the GSSF(#4 contractor) and security management as follows.

>> Please be aware that all visitors like contractors, customers, and other BW RU employees should be escorted by a SWTS employee in charge on the GSSF and security management.
1. Purpose: Implementation of 5 step visitor process for all visitors. 

>> Implementation of 5 steps including the process for all visitors.

2. Issued date: July 10th , Monday, 2017

>> Issued date: July 10th, Monday, 2017

3. P . I . C : SWTS employee in charge of visitor related works

>> P.I.C.: SWTS employees are in charge of visitors related works.

4. Others

>> Others:

1) Please comply with 5 step Security & EHS process to ensure safety of visitors and securities.

>> Please comply with 5 steps Security & EHS process to ensure safety of the visitors.

2) There are two type of materials in English and Korean

>> There are two types of materials, English and Korean.

3) Please click the hyperlink here Z:\\00. GM_HR\\HR\\안전\\방문자 Security & EHS 교육 및 프로세스

>> Correct

4) Please contact the TK Lim directly if you have a further questions

>> Please contact Tk Lim directly if you have further questions.