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1.This machine can facilitate losing your weight. 2.For crying out loud! Why did you do that again? 3.Can you say that again? You seem to say a cacology. 4.We don't mix well like chalk and cheese. 5.Yesterday was my first day that I was out of work. 6.It is stiil cold. I'm distressed to think that it will get cold more. 7.I'm happy because I have been out of work from yesterday. 8.I would be likely to start working 2 weeks later. 9.There isn't anything scheduled yet. 10.It seems not to be possible. 11.Even if one person thinks that they are just friend, another person may think that they will be a couple. That's the reason I think so. 12.It seems good that friendship remains just friendship. 13.Boys tend to have a different perspective generally than girls do. 14.I seem not to become that. But if it happens, I wouldn't say anything to him. 15.Because it will be likely to end badly again. 16.Show me your latent talent.

Hi Ms. [이름]! Thanks for dropping by here. Hmm, I think I already corrected some of your sentences here before, in your previous composition. Anyway, please review my corrections below. Have a good day. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.This machine can facilitate losing your weight. >> CORRECT Or >> This machine can help you lose weight.2.For crying out loud! Why did you do that again? >> CORRECT3.Can you say that again? You seem to say a cacology. >> You seem to have said a cacology.4.We don\'t mix well like chalk and cheese. >> CORRECT OR >> We don\'t get along well, like chalk and cheese.5.Yesterday was my first day that I was out of work. >> CORRECT OR >> Yesterday was the first day that I was jobless.6.It is stiil cold. I\'m distressed to think that it will get cold more. >> It is still cold. I feel distressed just thinking about how cold it would get.7.I\'m happy because I have been out of work from yesterday. >> I\'m happy because I\'ve been jobless since yesterday.8.I would be likely to start working 2 weeks later. >> I would likely start working 2 weeks later.9.There isn\'t anything scheduled yet. >> CORRECT10.It seems not to be possible. >> CORRECT OR >> It seems impossible. - better ^^11.Even if one person thinks that they are just friend, another person may think that they will be a couple. That\'s the reason I think so. >> Even if one person thinks that they are just friends, the other one might think of them as a couple. That\'s why I think it is possible.12.It seems good that friendship remains just friendship.>> It seems better if friends just remain to be friends. 13.Boys tend to have a different perspective generally than girls do. >> Boys generally tend to have a different perspective than girls do.14.I seem not to become that. But if it happens, I wouldn\'t say anything to him. >> I don\'t seem to be like that. But if it happens, I wouldn\'t say anything to him.15.Because it will be likely to end badly again. >> Because it will likely end in a bad way again.16.Show me your latent talent. >> CORRECT