Please correct my writing.

2012-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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1.I was really cheesed-off, but I controled my temper because of you. 2.The government expropriated the whole area of the Cheonggye creek for commercial purposes. 3.I have been looking for my future husband for a long time. I want to cherry-pick. 4.Love is a stronger and deeper feeling than friendship. 5.I couldn't even think to encounter you here. 6.I lost my bag and have not finded out one yet. 7.He quitted smoking on that day and has never smoked so far. 8.I have never eaten this stange food. 9.I have kept the present that he gave me so far. 10.He is suffering from sunstroke. 11.It will heal completely by this weekend. 12.I had been illing from a cold. 13.I couldn't do anything during 3 days. 14.So I did what I had held off such as English homework, cleaning my room and much more. 15.My favorite food is everything that is made from the wheat flour like pizza,bread,cookies. 16.It helps ease my stress by eating these. 17.I intend to reduce eating this for my health.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]! I think I already corrected some of your sentences here before, in your previous compositions. ^^ I checked them again so review my corrections below. Enjoy your day. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.I was really cheesed-off, but I controled my temper because of you. >> I was really cheesed off but I controlled my temper because of you.2.The government expropriated the whole area of the Cheonggye creek for commercial purposes. >> CORRECT *Good sentence!3.I have been looking for my future husband for a long time. I want to cherry-pick. >> CORRECT OR >> I am cherry picking. *Haha! Me too!!! 4.Love is a stronger and deeper feeling than friendship. >> CORRECT5.I couldn\'t even think to encounter you here. >> I didn\'t even think I would encounter you here.6.I lost my bag and have not finded out one yet. >> I lost my bag and haven\'t found it yet.7.He quitted smoking on that day and has never smoked so far. >> He quitted smoking on that day and have never smoked so far.8.I have never eaten this stange food. >> CORRECT *stange - strange9.I have kept the present that he gave me so far. >> I have kept all the presents that he gave me so far.10.He is suffering from sunstroke. >> CORRECT11.It will heal completely by this weekend. >> CORRECT12.I had been illing from a cold. >> I had been ill with a cold. OR >> I had been sick with a cold.13.I couldn\'t do anything during 3 days. >> I couldn\'t do anything during these past three days.14.So I did what I had held off such as English homework, cleaning my room and much more. >> CORRECT OR >> So I did what I had put off such as English homework, cleaning my room and much more.15.My favorite food is everything that is made from the wheat flour like pizza,bread,cookies. >> CORRECT OR >> I like everything made out of wheat flour such as pizza, bread and cookies. - better16.It helps ease my stress by eating these. >> Eating these helps ease my stress.17.I intend to reduce eating this for my health. >> CORRECT

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