Please correct my writing.

1.This topic is all about the co-workers we encounter. 2.The pharmacy doesn't need so many workers. There are about 3 to 10 people. 3.I have little opportunity for working with many different people. 4.I hate someone who avoids doing difficult tasks and comes to the office lately. 5.I have ignored one who I don't get along with and just carry on with my work. 6.I'm trying not to do that. 7.I'll try to have a honest talk with that people for finding out the reason. 8.A company shoud arrange a meeting to communicate with each other. 9.Food shoud be hermetic on summer. 10.I wish that I will get a second bite at the cherry next quarter. 11.It doesn't matter whether it is the first of second. 12.It doenn't matter how many offense it is. 13.Drunk drivers' first offense can cause to kill of hurt someone. 14.I'm likely to work at the pharmacy in seoul from next week. 15.I'm sorry to leave Daegu. And I'm afraid of living in Seoul by myself again.

Hi Ms. [이름]! Thank you for sending in a composition today. Here are some grammar corrections from your sentences. Please review them and take note of them. Enjoy your day. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.This topic is all about the co-workers we encounter. >> CORRECT2.The pharmacy doesn\'t need so many workers. There are about 3 to 10 people. >> CORRECT3.I have little opportunity for working with many different people. >> I have little opportunity to work with many different people.4.I hate someone who avoids doing difficult tasks and comes to the office lately. >> CORRECT *lately - late5.I have ignored one who I don\'t get along with and just carry on with my work.>> I ignored that person whom I didn\'t get along with and just carried on with my work. 6.I\'m trying not to do that. >> CORRECT7.I\'ll try to have a honest talk with that people for finding out the reason.>> I\'ll try to have an honest talk with that person to find out the reason. 8.A company shoud arrange a meeting to communicate with each other.>> CORRECT 9.Food shoud be hermetic on summer.>> CORRECT 10.I wish that I will get a second bite at the cherry next quarter.>> CORRECT OR >> I wish to get a second bite at the cherry next quarter. 11.It doesn\'t matter whether it is the first of second.>> CORRECT 12.It doenn\'t matter how many offense it is.>> It doesn\'t matter how many offenses it is. 13.Drunk drivers\' first offense can cause to kill of hurt someone.>> A drunk driver\'s first offense can hurt or even kill someone. 14.I\'m likely to work at the pharmacy in seoul from next week.>> CORRECT OR >> I\'ll probably work at a pharmacy in Seoul starting next week. 15.I\'m sorry to leave Daegu. And I\'m afraid of living in Seoul by myself again. >> CORRECT OR >> I feel sorry leaving Daegu. I\'m afraid to live in Seoul by myself again.