Please correct my writing.

1.I like the place where we went out to eat, but it would be nicer to go to the new place. 2.I think this shirt is nicer than that one. 3.You would be better to buy it instead to bollow. 4.I want to go to the place where some TV program showed before. 5.That's what I mean. I can't understand why drunk people drive a car. 6.They seem not to know that their choice may cause to kill or hurt someone. 7.The government must make a stronger law to ban drunk driving. 8.Drunk drivers must call a substitute driver of take the other transpotation. 9.The main idea is about extremely education system in Korea.

Hello Ms. [이름]! I checked your sentences below, please review them. Take note of how I rephrased some of them. Have a good night. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1.I like the place where we went out to eat, but it would be nicer to go to the new place. >> CORRECT2.I think this shirt is nicer than that one. >> CORRECT3.You would be better to buy it instead to bollow. >> It would be better for you to buy it instead of borrowing it.4.I want to go to the place where some TV program showed before. >> I want to go to the place where they shot some TV programs before.5.That\'s what I mean. I can\'t understand why drunk people drive a car.>> CORRECT OR >> I can\'t understand why drunk people still drive their cars. 6.They seem not to know that their choice may cause to kill or hurt someone. >> They seem to not know that their decision might hurt or kill someone.7.The government must make a stronger law to ban drunk driving. >> CORRECT OR >> The government must implement a stricter law to ban drunk driving.8.Drunk drivers must call a substitute driver of take the other transpotation. >> Drunk people must call a substitute driver or just take public transportation.9.The main idea is about extremely education system in Korea. >> The main idea is about the extreme education system in Korea.